CHAPTER 1
“Snowflake wakey wakey!” said snowflakes mom Monday morning. “Fall break is over up and at em!” “Fine!” said Snowflake. She was looking forward to seeing Pierre but school, not so much. She got ready for the cold day. She brushed her teeth, brushed her hair, put on her favorite outfit and was out the door. When she got to school she immediatly saw her friend Claireabelle. “Snowflake!” Claireabelle ran to meet her at her locker. “You won’t believe it! Frenchie is in the hospital! She broke her tail bone! SHe had a big operation and it was because she fell off Ryan’s four wheeler! He’s felling bad and she’s just felling sad!” she said so fast she had to repeat it for Snowflake. “What!?!?!?!” ” That is horrible! Now we know why she wasn’t messing with us! My mom is so taking me to visit her!” Snowflake felt bad for her but then Clairabelle snorted, “I’m happy it happened!” ”Serves her right!” Snowflake couldn’t beleive her newly groomed ears! “What but her tail, nobody deserves that!” “I guess your right.” said Clairabelle. “I can’t believe I said that!” The bell rang. It was time for homeroom. When she got there, there were two empty seats. Pierre’s and Frenchie’s. “Oh no! where is Pierre?” She wondered out loud. The teacher walked up and said, “Snowflake a terrible thing happened to Pierre during Fall break. I’d like to speak to you about it after school.” She had said that too slowly and too sadly. Snowflake worried all day and the worst was to come after school. But what was the teahcher going to tell her?
CHAPTER 2
Snowflake met the teacher after class. “I’m sorry to tell you but Pierre was in a terrible wreck. The doctors say he will never walk again.” She began to sob a little. For Snowflake a little sobbing was like one lick of a sucker. She had to sob a lot! “When can I see him?” She managed to say through tears. “Well, you can visit him after school if your mother will drive you. Her mom was off work and her mom would probably take her to see Frenchie and Pierre. I have to go! she thought to herself. When she got out of school her mom surprised her by picking her up. “Hey mom.” she said sadly. “Hi” said her mother. “We are going to the hospital.” “You heard?” snowflake said surprised. “Yes. Pierre’s parents contacted me with the news.”said her mother. ”Now lets go!” Said Snowflake.
Chapter 3
When Snowflake got to the hospital she immedialtely went to Frenchie’s room. She was afraid to see Pierre. Frenchie was watching a fashion show on her t.v. “Hi.” said Snowflake. ”What are you doing here?” said Frenchie. “I thought I’d check on you. None of your so called real friends are here. How are you?” “Fine” answered Frenchie, “and a little tired. “Oh, then I’ll leave. Get well soon!” she said as she left. Then Snowflake headed to the third floor to see Pierre. “Pierre?” “Come in!” he said. She walked into the room! “Oh Pierre!” She screamed. “It’s fine. He said. I’ll walk. God will help me.” he said trying to calm her down. ” O.k. Just don’t ever ride with your brother again!” They laughed. It hadn’t been his brother’s fault. A drunk driver had hit them on the passenger side where Pierre had been sitting. “I’m alive. That’s good!” “Your right!” she said. “But I’ll have to fight Jessi, Frenchie’s sister on my own. Wish me luck!” “I do!” said Pierre. “Bye!” Snowflake left the hospital feeling much better.
Chapter 4
The next day, Snowflake got up, dressed in her groovy hearts dress, and was out the door with a banana in her hand! She was in a hurry. She had to get to class, and get in her favorite seat before Jessi stopped her in the hall. She walked down the hall as fast as she could. Not a sign of Jessi. She was a happy little terrier. She almost ran to her locker and got her books. Her class was only a few yards away, so she slowed down. Then she was stopped by Jessi! “Hey whimp!” she said in a nasty voice. “What do you want, Jessi?” she asked. “I don’t have time for your bullying!” Jessi was surprised that Snowflake had stood up to her. She walked away and Snowflake smiled. “Victory!” she said. She walked in and got to her seat. She pulled out her library book and read. After school she went home and found a surprising note! It read…
Chapter 5
Snowflake,
You have been chosen to model in this years Miss Kinz fashion show.
Wear you best clothes and we will contact you afterwards. Meet us at the
Kinz stadium in the back at 5:00. See you there and good luck!
Snowflake could not believe what she was reading! She jumped for joy and was and was out the door. It was 4:45! She got to the stadium and waited in the back. It was cold and wet from the rain that morning. All of a sudden she was pulled from behind! She was being tugged to the prop shed! A tissue was placed over her mouth and nose! She could not scream! She passed out! She woke up at 7:00pm in the prop shed. It was freezing! She was so scared she could not move. She felt for the dor and stumbled out. She ran home as fast as she could.
Chapter 6
As soon as Snowflake got home she told her mother what happened. Snowflake’s mom called Jessi’s mom and the next day at school Jessi wasn’t there. The day went by quickly and soon Snowflake was home. She asked her mother why Jessi wasn’t there. “She was suspended for a week.” her mother replied. Snowflake was happy she didn’t have to deal with Jessi any longer. The next day at schhol, her happiness ended. Frenchie was there!!! Then, right behind Frenchie Pierre whelled in. “Pierre!” Snowflake shouted. He put a finger to his lips and pointed to the teacher. Oops! she mouthed to Pierre. She was happy Pierre was back. But why did he look so strange?








awesome page! love it!
yay!! u updated the story! HOORAY!
YAY!!!!!!! Frenchie will be MAD!!!!!!
I love the story!
Great Story!
Okay, so, Lana’s Page for everything? Um, A story isn’t everything. What else will you put on your page? It would be a whole lot better with other stuff like advice, recipes, pictures, comics, and all that fun stuff. Just a suggestion though. But I do like your story!
i dont like it because from the start i knew what would happen she wants a boyfriend peirre comes in she likes him he likes her and boom! i like the story but i want something to happen to nestlea something very good and i will let snowflake be in nestlea’s turn ok? and snowflake is a white terrier right say nestlea is a brown dog and what type of animal is ryan fenchie peirre tom and her mom
EVERYBODY LOVES MY STORY!!!!!!!
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!
hi everyone! I’m gunna comment here to proove that people do like lana’s page!
be quiet chocolabgirl look what i did to her page i put it was the best story in the world and look what i did 2 my page
hey guys, I won’t be commenting at webkinz for life until sunday or monday.
WELL can u at least talk 2 me!!!!
update your story
UPDATE!!!!!!
lana i luv ur story its awesome!!!!!!!!!!
hey what kind of poodle is frenchie
URRG!!!!! I HATE PIERRE AND FRENCHIE!!!!!!!!
C’MON UPDATE
frenchie is a pink poodle
PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!!!!!!
i did
im talking bout a chapter 7!!!!! omg i cant believe that happened! i want MORE!!!1 lol
could you please update?
You updated!
I love the update and my lab likes snowflake.
So cool!
why end it now> KEEP GOING!
im gonna start a new one dont worry! and poems!!!!!!!!!
Wow, great ending!
what kind of webkinz is ryan?
b and white cheeky
okay
FRECHIE’S A MEANER!
This story is something like romeo and juiluiet.
really?
Yeah but I like it and so does my lab henry.
lol
omg, i get so mixed up because you don’t put quotation marks in your stories! I don’t know when they are talking and when they aren’t! PLEASE put quotations on!
like this-
Spot said, “Oh my gosh! Look at that house!” Spot screamed. The house roared with flames and smoke. “Get out of here! We could get burned!!!” Tigger yelled, as they ran as far away as they could without stopping.
See the QUOTATIONS??? look, “these”
i know what quotatuions are!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok, Please don’t get upset, she did not mean to upset you.
ok ryan is a black and white cheeky!
thx wl505. lana, you don’t have to put “these” but it would make it a lot easier for people to read… it’s just my opinion though. sorry…
its fin!
i will delete today or tomorrow so read the end
oK!
Hey lana does ryan wanna dat
Franjessica my girl black poodle
Doodles my girl golden retriever
Nestlea ya know her!! Ok well does he want to date any of them?
he wants to date nestlea!
Oh really!! Nestlea will be so excited!! So where should the date be? How ’bout tommorow 4 o clock kinz time?
Uh ello any body era ello? (LOL)
well can we keep it apart kind of cause i dont really get on webkinz that much any mor. o like dizzywood.com! its awesome!
Ok well we can just to the date on WP
um no date to busy
Um how ’bout right now?
???
I thought Nestle went out with ryan and frenchie with Pierre. Or is this just a completely different story?
Oh well, great story!
this is the sequel you must be confused. in the end frenchie was with ryan and snowflake got pierre
Ohhh. OK. I’m a little slow.
GREAT STORY!
wl122, can you look at the new post? i’m still confused on the whole font thing.
awesome!
Yeah good story!!
awesome update! i can’t wait to find out what the note said!
ull see tomorrow!
OMG! It’s eating me up inside to know what it is!
Oh I know!!
OMG I CAN’T BELIEVE IT!!!!!
yeah its a drama all right!
You got that right! Write more!!
i will
i need some advice. if ur friend dont like 2 of ur friends what should u do? and what if the 1 friend dont even no the 1 other friend. but says they dont even like them becuz of who they hang with!?!?!?!
well hey i would tell that friend that they dont have to like my friends but tell that friend that you understand. if ur friends are mean to the other friend then tell them you dont like how they treat the one friend. does that help?
look hhe11 i said if the friends are mean which a and v are then tell them to keep me out of the conversation that was not for me! duh!
i didnt say i wasnt ur friend, i said i wasnt a and v’s friend
i said i was mad at her cause she talked smack to me!
i said i didnt like it cause i was on the phone with you and she said well who do you think is talkin to kaitlyn in a VERY mean way! and yall laughed!
whatever!
well just quit saying i dont like her cause of who she hangs out with! that is soooo not the reason!
well how can u say v is mean u dont even no her and just cuz she said 1 thibng 2 u with a little mad at some1 else, then fine but either way a has changed! and u havent even talked 2 her since like 4th grade! so dont say they r mean!
ok 1 i am so gonna ban you if i hear or see one more word
and 2 i dont like her! deal with it!
I for 1, loved the story!!!
But why did both of your storys invole in the girl likes some guy and the girl likes the guy and there boy & girl friend see my story. U may not like it but i like it.
Comment if u like!!!!!!!!!!
I just started 2 do it today it’s not finished yet though
Almost forgot
http://www.whitesoxthebest51.webs.com
ill check it out! that is lanagirl112’s story mine! and the other was webkinzlover122’s story!
write more in it lana! Can Franjessica be in the story?
Can my golden retrievers, Mellonee and Cheyenne, be in it?
my love puppy could be someone!!!
Can Franjessica be in it?